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Naito, Kenshiki (Complete)

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Naito, Kenshiki (Complete)

Post by kenshiki naito on Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:10 am

Naito, Kenshiki

Spoiler:

"Wars aren't won be dying for your country. Their won by making the other fellow die for his."

* 'it's society's mask, it's society's way'
{. this is your stage, your character .}


Character Name: Kenshiki Naito

-------Alias or nickname:
Friends- Kenshi
other ninja- The White Samurai
Zodiac Sign: Aquarius
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Hometown: Konoha
Sexuality: Straight

Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Jonin
Element(s):
Main-Fire
Sub- Earth
KKG- Youton (Lava/Magma)

Specialties:
Main: Kenjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu

Alignment: Neutral- Lawful
Occupation: Innkeeper
Special Characteristics:
Resolve
The character has become accustomed to the horrors of the Ninja world and possesses a steely resolve. (A Character with this Spec cannot take Cowardice Spec as well)-
-Kenshiki resolved to kill any ninja who would do what Auoshi did, attacking their friends and letting them die out of something as stupid as jealousy. Kenshiki defended himself against one of his friends who were being controlled through mind possession jutsu by Auoshi and they accidentally died by Kenshiki's swords.

Light Sleeper
The character is very light sleeper. Any noise at all will instantly awaken him to a state of full alert. The character is no easier to sneak up on while asleep than he is when he is awake.-
-Kenshiki became a light sleeper early on in his life, when he was learning from master Saiten there was other students who would steal his stuff and even throw stuff at him in the night, so he trained himself to be aware of his surroundings even when he was sleeping.

Time Sense
The character is never late. He possesses a preternatural sense of timing and knows the exact time down to a few seconds. Because punctuality and timeliness are intimately tied to professionalism in the Ninja mind, time sense is a much valued aptitude..

Uncontrollable Temper
The character is prone to extraordinary fits of anger. When the mood takes him, it overwhelms all reason, and he destroys and maims everything in his path until exhaustion overtakes him. These rages are generally marked with periods of blackouts in which the character forgets his actions entirely.

Colorblind
Something of a misnomer, most color-blind character simply cannot distinguish between either red and green or blue and yellow. True color blindness, when the sufferer sees the world only in shades of gray, is extremely rare.

Mute
Due to physical or psychological infirmity, the character has an inability to speak, though he may have a limited ability to grunt. Providing the character is not a psychological mute, his speech functions may be restored to a limited degree


Ambidextrous
The character is equally adept at using either hand. Although ambidexterity is rare at birth, it can be learned. Most duelists spend their whole lives refining this talent.



* 'and the truth is...it's all a façade!'
{. appearance .}

Height: 6'2"
Weight: 160 lbs = 72.7 kg
Hair: Black
Eyes: Royal Blue
Others: N/A
General Appearance:
He has white skin; arms are more tanned than rest of body. Height is about 6 foot 1 in. he wears yellow-gold colored tortoise-shell glasses over his blue eyes. Almost always wear his white jacket which is like his trade mark. On the back of the jacket is a picture of the leaf village symbol with crossed swords over it. Kenshiki rarely wear his headband, which unlike the avg. blue band color his is white made from the same material as his jacket.

Wears a white jacket over a chain mail shirt. He wears two swords, one on his right hip and one on his left. On the right hip is Yochi sheath, and on the left is Hinote sheath. He wears dark blue pants. In his white armor he has a few scrolls, a self made Bingo Book, about 10 Shuriken, and a small Dagger, which is about twice the size of a kunai. He wears the sandals like Jiraiya's. On his back is a pack back which contains a few small books, 50 shuriken, 1 Fuuma shuriken, and other small things.



* 'and what's hiding inside....behind all of our fears'
{. the facts .}

Personality: Kenshiki is very quiet and usually does not speak unless spoken to. When he gets angry or sad or just feels like nothing will go his way he tends to go into a forest or some where to train alone and reflect on the situation. Kenshiki is passive-aggressive, but if he is challenged to fight he won't flee he will engage the enemy. He can commonly be found meditating, on anything, such as his past, people around him or etc.

Kenshiki doesn't like to talk about his past. He feels that if he said he was going to do something like a mission he will do everything in his power to complete it, Loves to spar with younger people to learn about them and him. If you ask him to do something for you, and he can do it, most of the time he will say yes.
Kenshiki doesn't really have a reason for fighting as a ninja, other than self preservation, and self realization. He doesn't really care about the village or restoring his clan's former strength.

The Clan
Spoiler:

Character Skills
Psychology
Psychology is the science of the human mind. During the Village Era psychology came to be a respectable field of study under the aegis of medicine, and thus, the notion of curing the mentally afflicted began to receive serious attention as well.
ANBU maintains a division devoted to inquiry into the criminal mind: profilers provide valuable insight into the patterns of murder and analysts assist in designing and executing the interrogation.
A character with this skill will have insight into the mental patterns of those with whom he interacts. After interacting with another character; a character with this ski ll will be able to diagnose Mental Qualities, Impediments, and Disorders.
• Applied (Able to calculate movements and mental thoughts in battle)

Shadow
The character knows how to make his way through the streets without calling attention to himself. He knows how to observe a subject while on the move, how to the shadows to avoid detection, utilize probable short cuts, and keep a safe distance to avoid suspicion.
• Crowds



* 'livin' like a masquerade...actin' a bizarre charade'
{. the fun stuff .}


-Canon Jutsu-
Spoiler:

-Ninjutsu-

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.


Name: transformation = (Henge no Jutsu)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Clone Jutsu = (Bunshin no Jutsu)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: "Fire Style: Dragon Flame Jutsu"
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user breathes a massive amount of fire along a cord or any other type of long object.

Name: "Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu"
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: Utilizing a large amount of chakra, a large ball of flame is exhaled from the user's mouth.

Name: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.

Name: Mud Overturn = (Doro Gaeshi)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: is a defensive technique. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.

Name: Stone Lodging Destruction = (Iwa Yado Kuzushi)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whoever is trapped inside. Can be used in close, mid ,and far range

Name: "Earth Release Barrier: Dungeon Chamber of Nothingness"
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu traps the victims inside a dome of earth that can repair itself. User is able to absorb the chakra of everyone trapped inside. User's chakra is distributed throughout the dome, more chakra where the user is at, so it is stronger there and weaker on the opposite side

Name: Earthen Rising Spears (Doryuusou)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doryuusou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, spears of stone will raise from the ground to pierce the target. The technique can be countered by an opponent who hardens their body with a stronger Earth Element jutsu.

-Custom Jutsu-
Spoiler:

-Kenjutsu-
Name: Impact Slash
Rank: E
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: -
Description: This attack requires that you have a weapon with a blade drawn you then ram the enemy and while they are off balance you then slash them with the blade. The blade can be a knife to a long sword and anything in between.

Name: "Sword Dance of the Eagle"
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element:
Description: This is performed by the user hitting the target in the air, then going up in the air and doing 6-8 slashes with a bladed weapon. Kenshiki commonly does this before 'Blazing Blast jutsu = (kaen bakuha)'

Name: Sword Dance of the Turtle
Rank: D
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: -
Description: This jutsu allows the user to temp combine the bottom of the hilts of their swords,[need 2 swords] and spin them at high speed to deflect ninja tools.

Name: Sword Dance of the Tiger
Rank: D
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: -
Description: This jutsu starts with both swords drawn and the left is behind the back while the right arm with the right sword is by the left side then the user spins at a speed similar to the Palm rotation and is spinning like a top. while he is spinning the sword are pointing outward.

Name: Sword Dance of the Phoenix
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This tech requires that the user is using a sword that can channel their fire chakra. They thrust their sword in the direction of the target and send a beam of fire through the sword in the direction it is pointing. the range is equal to length & width of sword

Name: Sword Dance of the Dragon
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: This tech requires that the user is using a sword that can channel their earth chakra. They thrust their sword in the ground in the direction of the target and send a beam through the sword to go through the ground in the direction it is pointing. the target does not have to be right there but within short range

Name: Sword Dance of the Snake
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This tech requires a bladed weapon. Generally a short-sword and up for length. It is where the user has the weapon out and the user will thrust the blade at the target with chakra at the tip. They will thrust it at the target in 9 spots. They will stab at point on the body to disable the target. The points are the center of the chest, Inside of elbows, Both heels, Both shoulders, and Inside of both knees. If done properly the stabs won't draw any blood, but it will still do damage to the target's body. This tech is done at a high enough speed that the user appears to be a blur to the target. The user will also strike, the bottom of the neck if they intened to kill the target

Name: Sword Dance of the Rat
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Earth
Description:(This jutsu requires the ability to use Earth chakra, and a sword that can channel it.) The tech starts out with the user doing a dash attack at the target then do a quick spin and do another. This is done four times. Then on the fifth time though the user will point the tip of the blade in the ground when they reach the desired area and will jump. at that point the ground withen 5 feet of where the tip hit will raise as columns and clumps. The ground will go up about ten feet and smash into anything in that area. All that is left is a crater that is five feet wide and ten feet deep. This Crater normally isn't important but is used with another Naito Clan Jutsu

-Ninjutsu-

Name: Blazing Blast jutsu = (kaen bakuha)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: in one hand then using the other hand to do 5 quick one handed hand signs to shoot out fire from that hand, for about 5ft. and last about 8 seconds. The fire shoots out in a straight line, but it's path can be affected by strong enough winds. The fire cannot burn through metal, but can start to melt it, it can burn through cloth, leather and similar material.

Name: Inferno Sphere = (inferuno kuiki)
Rank: B-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu was created by Ryu Naito long ago. it creates an orb of fire chakra in the user’s hand. the difficulty to mastering this jutsu is keeping it from expanding due to the open air. so the training method to learning this starts with learning it inside and keeping a leaf from completely burning, but the flame can’t go out. then they practice with a ball the flame inside causing it to expand but they got to keep it in check or the ball will burst. the next step is keep the orb the desired size outside and hitting a target. the jutsu it self looks likes a red orb spinning with tiny bits of fire coming of like the sun. when it hits it burns what it hits. You use it like chidori & Rasengan hitting it into target there are 3 levels to this jutsu.
Rank B-Lv.1 it is yellow-orange
Rank A-Lv.2 it is blue, can cause 2nd degree burns
Rank S-Lv.3 it is white, can cause 3rd degree burns, Causes 1st. degree burns on user

Name: Rising Earth Pillar
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description:The user will store earth chakra in their hands, and then smack their hands to the ground. the area around the user, radius of 5ft from where hands struck the ground, will then rise up as a pillar 15ft in the air.

Name: Earth Style:Earth Clone Jutsu (Doton Bashin no jutsu)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The Doton Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Unlike the shadow clone jutsu, when these clones are destroy they turn to stone incaseing any bladed weapon in them. they then remain there for a time then crumble to dust
Duration: From when the clone is defeated and becomes stone, to the point they crumble is 2 posts

Name: Magma Pump Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava (Fire & Earth)
Description: This jutsu requires that there be some kind of crater in the ground for the magma to travel through. After the user does about 15 hand signs the user will smack both of their hands on the ground send chakra to the crater to make it blast out the lava. Generally the user will be on elevated ground or use a crater that is curved away from them. Also the user can not chose the direction that the lava flows, They can only change the amount flowing out of the crater, but that is limited based on the size of the crater. The wider it is the more that can come out. Also the user must keep their hands on the ground while the jutsu is active.

Name:Lava Sphere = Kazangan
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan:Naito
Element: Lava (Fire & Earth)
Descrpition: This jutsu Kenshiki created following some of the ideas of the inferuno kuiki and altering them. For starters instead of limiting the fire element in it the user feeds their fire chakra into it and has to keep it going or it will lose its effect. the jutsu itself appears to be a brown orb, with a red inner core, rock and earth stuff over the core with red fire going around it. to learn this the user has to be able to form an orb of earth and be able to keep the fire going and when they are useing it they use their chakra to fuze the two elements at the point of impact for the most effect. when it hit it smashes into the target and burns them. You use it like chidori & Rasengan hitting it into target


-Summoning jutsu-

Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Spiritualism Technique
Rank: -
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: -
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows them to summon different size and skill levels of creature. The ability to summon more advanced animals largely depends upon the amount of chakra the ninja can muster to perform the jutsu. To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary hand seals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summoning will be complete.

Name: Chocobo
Rank: B
Type of Summon: Blood Donation,
Species: Ostrich-Chicken
Description: A chocobo is about 7-10 ft tall, have a wing span of half their height. Despite having wings, chocobos can't fly, but can glide. They have very powerful legs which allow them to get up to about 80 mph and can keep that speed up for about ten minutes at a time. Also their powerful legs allow them to jump very high and very far. Chocobos can carry about two adults.
Picture:

Elemental Affinity: Lightning

Summoning's Jutsu:

Name: Choco Lightning
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan: N/A
Element: Lightning
Description: The User of this tech will suck in some air, hold it for a little bit then blow outward causing lightning bolts from the mouth to release and go in the general direction the user is facing. Note ninja string can be used to help direct this attack.

Name: Lightning Absorption Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan: N/A
Element: Lightning
Description: When this jutsu is activated it last about a half hour (3 posts) It causes the users body to be resistant to lightning based attacks be absorbing __% of the chakra from those attacks.
98% of C ranks
78% of B ranks
58% of A ranks
38% of S ranks

Name: Lightning Strike
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Clan: N/A
Element: Lightning
Description: This tech allows part of the user's body to be charged with lightning chakra for a short time, generally one good attack. And the user will attack the target with a punch or a kick, or some form of taijutsu attack, dealing lightning damage to the target.

Name: Choco Armor
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan: N/A
Element:
Description: This tech can ONLY be used by a chocobo. When it is performed the chocobo's feathers will toughen until they are as strong as steel, and this will protect them from taijutsu based attacks, and some other low level attacks.

Name: Steel Beak
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu / strengthen Taijutsu
Clan: N/A
Element:
Description: This can only be used by a creature with a beak, When this is done it will allow the user to break through rock and armor and other objects with its beak. And it can also be used for defense to make the beak a shield to protect against attacks.

Weapons
Spoiler:

Styles
*Kenjutsu, Weaponry and Taijutsu users only.**
Name: Genson-Ken
Rank: C
Style Type: Kenjutsu
Style Weapon: Single, or Dual Katana,
Description: The Genson-Ken style is all about the user performing very fast slashes to create the illusion of multiple swords, and confuse the opponent trying to follow the sword(s) motions.

Single- Using only one sword for the style is less for creating an illusion, but this style frees up one of the users hands, so the can bring out something like kunai or shuriken, of they can using a one handed jutsu. With only a single sword, the sword is used primarily as a defense rather than offense, while the open hand can be used as offense. Also the user can switch arms when one gets tired.

Dual- When using two swords, the Genson-Ken is all about the swords. The user is able to use both swords as either their offense or defense, with their full force, while using the speed of their swords to confuse the opponent. The drawback to using both swords like this is, it can ware out an inexperienced warrior quite quickly, so it is best used in a short battle, rather than a prolonged battle. Also the user can use one sword as an offense while having the other as defense and switch back and forth to cover their weaknesses.

* 'is our true self....locked inside the façade!'
{. the history .}


History:
Pre Genin Arc: Birth - 10yrs
Spoiler:

Kenshiki Naito was born in the Hidden Leaf Village. At the age of three both his parents were killed by a small scale assault on the Leaf Village. He lived with some friends of the family but it didn't last.
A FEW MONTHS AFTER HE TURNED FIVE HIS AUNT AND UNCLE, HIS ONLY LIVING REALATIVES, CAME TO THE LEAF VILLAGE to take him to where his family originated, a small non-ninja village on the outskirts of the fire country, here he first met Kyo Saiten the only living master of the Genson-Ken Style. Kenshiki liked this because his clan’s warriors, who trained in both the ninja arts and samurai arts, used the Genson-Ken Style. He didn’t know it then, but here with Master Saiten he would not only learn special abilities and techniques but he would also learn about himself rather he would like it or not. After the first few weeks he knew all the young students and a few experienced students. He became very good friends with Auoshi Yamanaka, who was one of the experienced students. Master Saiten did not believe that you could learn everything by training in a dojo, so he sent students out for field training in groups of two. One experienced student and one younger student. Every time Kenshiki or Auoshi Yaminaka was sent out they would always choose the other. These two were like brothers and learned a lot from each other. One one such mission, Kenshiki and Aoushi went to a small underground facility where some trouble makers were causeing problems for a nearby village, that had no warriors. The clients for this mission, though had too little information. They reported it was a single criminal, but they had no information on a second person, a rogue genin. When Kenshiki and Aoushi got to the facility they were attacked, Aoushi left Kenshiki to deal with the rogue, not knowing he had some ninjutsu, and went to check the area out for other enemys. During the battle, Kenshiki got a number of scratches on his body, though none were deep. Near the end of the battle Aoushi returned with the other guy tied up. Seeing this the rogue used one of his clan's jutsu, which created a bright flash, that temporarely blinded Kenshiki, and stopped Aoushi from coming closer. The rogue used that time to escape. When Kenshiki could see again he realized that all he saw was gray. Aoushi blamed himself, for leaveing Kenshiki to deal with him. When Kenshiki turned ten, Kyo gave him a starter bingo book because of his ability to analyze opponents and weapons etc. and find their weak-points. Kenshiki took very good care of the bingo book and quickly filled it with a lot of information on the students and warriors in the village. Thanks to his ability to analyze his opponents during battle, Kenshiki adapted quickly to the Genson-Ken style. For awhile Kenshiki used only a single sword when battleing, but found its limitations to be troublesome. Kenshiki then took the Advise of Auoshi, and tried useing two swords. At first it was difficult to do, but Kenshiki soon adapted to it and made it his own. About half a year later Auoshi Yaminaka was promoted to senior student and Kenshiki was promoted to experienced student. This gave him Genin status.
Genin Arc: 10yrs - 13yrs
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On the day of his promotion Kenshiki was given a special mission that only he was allowed to go on. The mission was simple, find the bandits cave and defeat them. All he was allowed to take was two wooden swords, twenty shuriken, and any supplies he deemed necessary. When he found the cave he considered himself lucky because there were only two bandits and the others were just killed by those two. He was a little nervous because they could defeat ten others, but they probably used surprise to get them. Kenshiki took out a few smoke bombs and ten shuriken. If he was going to beat them he would do it the right way and avoid injury. so he threw down the smoke bombs startling the enemies then threw 5 shuriken to the left and 5 to the right, and hid waiting for the smoke to clear. When it did he found two people on the ground in pain. At that point he figured it was best for them to die by their own weapons. so he took them and pierced their hearts. He was cleaning up the treasure that had been taken and two old swords stuck out. Later he would name them Kaji and Yochi. He had a weird feeling about them but ignored it and put them in the bag with the other stuff. After two days of people coming and retrieving their stuff, all that remained was the two swords. figuring this was his chance he took the sword cleaned them up and sharpened them until they were ready for combat. About a year and a half after that Kenshiki was promoted to a senior student, that was quiet fast compared to the others. some say it is because of his ability to analyze his opponents effectively, others claim it is due to his determination. everyone was happy for him, everyone, but Aoushi Yaminaka. he had spent 4 years before he became a senior student. this made him jealous so he took his time to come up with a plan for revenge. During this time Kenshiki was developing his own jutsu based off the Hyuga style taijutsu and the Genson-Ken style. Also during this time Kenshiki was becoming more involved with the assistant teacher of the dojo named Shira, she was 18 and was quiet attractive in Kenshiki's eyes. They spent a lot of time together training and talking. Aoushi learned about this and decided it would work to destroy him. Rather then striking early Aoushi decided to wait a few years to let Kenshiki become old enough to love her. He chose to put his plan into action when Kenshiki was 12, by then Aoushi and Shira became elite students the rank just under master Saiten. At this point Kenshiki doesn't remember the details of what led up to this point, he blacked out at one point. Kenshiki later remembered everything that happened, but he failed to feel any pain, or anyother emotions (Details in RP sample). Kenshiki was not far from his target. He had spent five days getting clues on it and two hours following it he was not going to give up now, because failure is not an option. The target was taking turns everywhere, it was apparent to Kenshiki that the target knew he was following him and trying to get rid of him. The target stopped in a field and waited for Kenshiki to appear before saying, "Not much good if I find you following me."
"Ha, ha you had your fun. Now it is time to take you in." Kenshiki said drawing his swords for battle.
"Come on," He said coughing then said, "what is this how you treat your old friends. Well I suppose it is better then killing them like you did to her."
Kenshiki didn't show any emotions. but what Auoshi or the 'Target' was saying meant something to him but he was on a mission and must complete it or all this time would have been all for naught. Now Auoshi drew his father's Wakizachi it still had blood on it because Kyo hadn't seen fit to clean it as a form of disrespect to Master Saiten's teaching, about how a sword is your life if you treat it well it shall reward you.
"Why?" Kenshiki asked Auoshi, "why did you go rogue? You were a terrific swordsmen very few alive today could beat you."
"You really don’t understand yet do you? I did it because of you. Now Kenshiki shown some confusion and hurt for a second, but Kyo saw it, and knew it was working. "Yeah, that’s right because of you, brat"
"What the hell do you mean by that?" Kenshiki asked trying to make some logic out of what his old friend was saying
"What I mean is, when you came to the village and entered the dojo you became skilled, skilled enough that people paid less attention to me, and for a while I got over it. Then when you achieved that special mission and completed it I knew you were becoming to good and would eventually defeat me so I left your fantasy world and began planning and that night a few weeks ago was the perfect time to do it." Auoshi said with a twisted grin on his face. Kenshiki got real angry at this and almost lost his temper, but in the end that would only cause problems.
"Oh and if you are wondering Ken I only said what was in her mind when I used mind possession jutsu." Auoshi said. That broke it for Kenshiki he now didn't care about taking Aoushi in he just wanted to make him pay. He lunged at Auoshi with Kaji ready to stop him and Yochi held back for defensive purposes. Kyo was able to block Kenshiki's attack and Kenshiki was able to do the same for Aoushi's attacks. they kept doing this for a few minutes till Kenshiki changed his style to one he learned practicing with girl. Kyo had no idea how Kenshiki was going to attack now because he never seen these attacks before. At that point Auoshi was beginning to regret not learning new attacks or creating his own style. That right there gave him only a ten percent chance at victory and that was if he got lucky, but it was easy to tell Kenshiki spent long hours learning the style and mastering its offence as well as its defense. Finally after ten long minutes of sword clashing, Kenshiki pierced Auoshi's sword arm leaving him defenseless
"Well.. you finally defeated me Ken." Auoshi said blood dripping from his mouth.
"Now do you understand my power? I did not just sit around doing nothing to become so strong, I trained till I was unable to move my body."
"You just got lucky" Aoushi said spitting blood at Kenshiki. Kenshiki then stabbed Aoushi's other arm with Yochi, and said "That is why you have limited power. That is why I was able to surpass you." Kenshiki then took both of his swords out of Aoushi and used Aoushi's jacket to get some of the blood off of his swords.
"Why don't you just get it over with and kill me" Aoushi said on the ground in pain and looked up to ask, "are you weak?"
"No, I will make you suffer as I have." Kenshiki said sheathing his sword.
"You, are weaker then I thought," Aoushi said trying to get up without the use of his bleeding arms.
"Why won’t you wake up and realize the truth, Aoushi" Kenshiki said feeling bad about what is happening.
"The truth will show it self" he said kicking his father's sword into the air then letting it go through his neck killing him almost instantly.
"So be it," Kenshiki said he was about to leave him for the buzzards but considering they were friends for a while he decided to bury him. After that was would have returned to the town but since he could not bring him in alive he chose to leave forever, but where to go? The only other place he could call home was the leaf village. It would be about a long journey on foot, but Kenshiki felt he had to make but first it was his master's dojo custom for when their students die to burn this sword. Kenshiki still had anger towards Aoushi but would grant him this so he made the hand signs and said “Fire style: Fire Ball Jutsu." A massive fire blast came from Kenshiki mouth, it wasn't hot enough to melt the sword but it was left charred. After this was done Kenshiki started to go back to the Hidden Leaf, but he knew that his realitives in the area would hunt him down for disgrace their name, so he went to the only other place he knew where he had family. Also at this point Kenshiki slowly started to lose his ability to speak. At times he could say what he needed to, but at other times he couldn't even sigh. He wasn't sure if during the battle if he got hit too hard in the upper chest, or if he just didn't want to be hurt like this again.The Village Hidden in the Rock, Iwagakure, was less likely to judge him, and he could continue his training, what that training was for, Kenshiki had found the answer with deaths of his friends.
After about 1 year later. It is known that the village Kenshiki was at had put a bounty of 12,000 on his head but was canceled about 4 months after it was put up. At the time Kenshiki didn’t know why nor did he care.
Kenshiki went through the gates of his new home, and headed toward the kage's office. On the way he kept his face forward, but shifted his eyes around, to get a feel for the place. In the kage's office Kenshiki was officially given genin status due to the level of skill he preformed to the kage. About two months later Kenshiki took the chunin exams and passed with flying colors. When Kenshiki was settled in the village he worked at his family's inn, learning how deal with people, identify people with weapons, criminals, and etc, learning the trade. He started out as the gaurd and the place was calm.
Chunin Arc: 13yrs - 15yrs
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During his time as a Chunin, Kenshiki was learning about his elemental nature and of his clan’s ability. He managed to use Earth and Fire for the first time. He intensified his elemental training over all others. He wanted to fully grasp the greatness of the Naito clan. He was only a Chunin for a short while and lead 5 missions, 4 of them a success and one failure. Kenshiki blames himself for the failure but the other people in the squad tried and failed to convince him that they had too little information from the start. After that he went on about 10 missions alone, all successful. Other then that he spent his time training. Kenshiki worked his way up, in the inn and eventually reached assistant manager of the inn. A while later when he was 15 he was granted Jounin rank.
Jounin Arc: 15yrs - 18yrs
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Kenshiki was quiet excited about becoming Jounin but you couldn't tell by looking at his expression. Kenshiki didn't like showing his emotions, because of his past with his friend and possibly girl friend. Kenshiki commonly went on missions alone preferably rather then with other people because he didn't want to be responsible if something happened. and now the story goes on. He spent a few months training with one of the few Naito clan members that are still alive and learned to make Youton (lava) Element. This was difficult but Kenshiki never gave up. Kenshiki started to open up to some people but only those he knew real well, and he doesn't let any of them real close for fear that they will betray him. At the age of 17, Kenshiki's uncle, the owner of the inn retired, leaving Kenshiki to either sell it, or take it over. Kenshiki decided that takeing over the inn would give him a chance to further his analyzing ability, and increase his skills, and abilities, so he agreed to run it. The first thing Kenshiki did was rename the inn to The Oni-Wa-Ban inn. Then he talked with cousin, a genin named Akane, and copnvinced her to be the inn's guard.
Present

RP Sample: Kenshiki sat against the chimney, on the roof of the building, staring of into space. He was remembering the night he slain 30 men in self-defense. He didn't want to kill them, but he wasn't skilled enough to get around them, or disable them.

"There he is, the one who murdered my sister, I saw him," A high-pitched voice said accusingly. Kenshiki looked up and saw Shira's sister, Shiva, and then, in his mind he saw Shira's last expression before she died. The fresh memory of the events that transpired tore him up inside, but didn't show on his face. He kept the blank expression as he stared into her tear filled eyes. "You murderer!" she yelled as the town's workers and defenders came up beside her.

Kenshiki opened his mouth to say something but nothing came out, so he closed it. "You’re under arrest, and are to stand trial for Shira's murder. Take off those swords and come with us," one of the adults said to Kenshiki holding up a crude, iron scimitar. Kenshiki's hands went to his swords slowly, but he never moved his eyes from Shiva.

"I can't," was all Kenshiki managed to whisper. The people then raised their weapons, and Kenshiki's instincts to defend himself took control of his body, and he drew his weapons and killed anyone who tried to stop him from leaving.

A bird called in the distance and kenshiki was released from the trance he was in. When he remembered where he was, he saw that it was night now; he then stood and whispered to himself "I can't," and left hoping that this would be the last time he would see Shiva's face, and remember that night. Since that he resolved to kill any ninja who would do what Auoshi did, attacking their friends and letting them die out of something as stupid as jealousy.

Kenshiki left the roof top and jumped from house to house as he went toward his destination; he knew that he was proven innocent for the death of Shira, master Saiten had sent him a letter saying that it was proven that Auoshi had control of her at the time, and left plenty of notes about the plan. When Kenshiki first read it he was angry at Auoshi. It was one thing to lose control of yourself in the heat of the moment, but it was another to plan to kill someone who looked up to you for so long and use someone they loved as the killer. Kenshiki was also mad at himself for not realizing there was something wrong with Aoushi all that time. Kenshiki wondered why all of a sudden he felt ready to return to the small village and face punishment for Blood Night, which was when Kenshiki resisted arrest and fled the village killing anyone who was got in his way, and was armed. The first two weeks after he left his home he was dodging bounty hunters, that the village hired, promised to be paid 1300 yen. But after that they stopped coming, and there was nothing in Saiten’s letter about why.

It was midnight by the time Kenshiki made it to the outer-most land owned by his old village. He stopped the Moonlight Bridge and stared at the waters he hadn't viewed in many years. It wasn't too hard to see the fish in the water because the full moon's glow hit the properly named bridge even this late at night. As Kenshiki basked in the beauty he missed someone approached the bridge’s northern end and stopped just before touching it.

“Halt, who….” The female voice said firmly before cutting out. Kenshiki sighed; he knew the voice and was surprised that she would be the first to find him back from his exile.

“Shiva, shouldn’t you be in bed?” Kenshiki said turning. He was relieved that she was too far for him to see her eyes. He did see though that she had a standard border guard’s crossbow drawn and pointing at him.

“What do you care?!?” The voice yelled back, cracking. It was obvious that she hadn’t forgiven him, and Kenshiki hadn’t expected her to either. “Get out of here now, or I will kill you, and cut the crap.” Kenshiki was surprised that she was telling him to leave instead of killing him or capturing him, but he didn’t let this show on his face.

“You’re a border guard now? Why aren’t you in master Saiten’s class?” Shiva said nothing and loosed a bolt that came just inches from his hand on the rail. He figured that he should have avoided the subject, but now he was curios. What was going on here? “Fine, let’s talk about something less painful. The river’s water is still as beautiful as the night you and Shir… your sister first shown it to me all those years ago.”

“That’s because it isn’t flowing with your blood yet. Now this is your last chance to leave, or I will kill you.” Kenshiki stepped closer to see her face and saw tears flow down her face, as he did so she raised the crossbow, but didn’t fire. “You want to know why I’m not there, because he doesn’t care for my sister. After Auoshi’s notes were found he defended you and got you cleared of all charges.” Kenshiki now understood why he left it out; it was to keep this meeting from happening. Saiten knew her pain would cause her to do something stupid like kill him and she would have to face it for the rest of her life, and with the low tolerance for crime that would be longer than a month. “Did you hear me? Leave now.”

Kenshiki stood there a moment, he knew he could disarm her at anytime, but for some reason he wasn’t sure if he should. Then he thought of Shira and knew that he couldn’t let Shiva ruin her life. With speed that Shiva couldn’t match Kenshiki ran toward her and used the handle of one Kaji and smashed it into the crossbow, damaging it in the process. When Shiva realized what was going on she braced her self waiting to feel the cold sting of death from his sword, but instead all she felt was his embrace and looked up to see the care in his eyes for a few seconds before they went back to the usual blankness. She stood there for a moment, before pushing him away and turning around. “I’m not sure if you care what I have to say Shiva, but I’ll tell you anyway. I’m sorry for what happened…”

“No. You defended your self; Auoshi killed my sister, not you.” Kenshiki felt a weight lift from his body, not because she forgave him, but because she let the malice that had built up go. “Now, please leave.” Kenshiki smiled then left knowing that in time she might want him to return, but for now she should be alone.


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Re: Naito, Kenshiki (Complete)

Post by Hayato Uchiha on Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:51 pm

1. If you're going to use double swords, I suggest that you be ambidextrous. And I also think you should add dome more special characteristics that fit your character and possibly give him a weak special characteristic like uncontrollable temper etc etc.

2.


Name: Choco Lightning
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan: N/A
Element: Lightning
Description: The User of this tech will suck in some air, hold it for a little bit then blow outward causing lightning bolts from the mouth to release and go in the general direction the user is facing. Note ninja string can be used to help direct this attack.

Name: Lightning Absorption Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan: N/A
Element: Lightning
Description: When this jutsu is activated it last about a half hour (5-7 posts) It causes the users body to be resistant to lightning based attacks be absorbing 98% of the chakra from those attacks.

Name: Lightning Strike
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Clan: N/A
Element: Lightning
Description: This tech allows part of the user's body to be charged with lightning chakra for a short time, generally one good attack. And the user will attack the target with a punch or a kick, or some form of taijutsu attack, dealing lightning damage to the target.

Name: Choco Armor
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan: N/A
Element:
Description: This tech can ONLY be used by a chocobo. When it is performed the chocobo's feathers will toughen until they are as strong as steel, and this will protect them from taijutsu based attacks, and some other low level attacks.

Name: Steel Beak
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu / strengthen Taijutsu
Clan: N/A
Element:
Description: This can only be used by a creature with a beak, When this is done it will allow the user to break through rock and armor and other objects with its beak. And it can also be used for defense to make the beak a shield to protect against attacks.

I'm assuming these jutsu are for your summon?

Also these jutsu:
Name: Lightning Absorption Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan: N/A
Element: Lightning
Description: When this jutsu is activated it last about a half hour (5-7 posts) It causes the users body to be resistant to lightning based attacks be absorbing 98% of the chakra from those attacks.

It's OP, a B-rank jutsu that lasts 7 posts that prevents lightning jutsu to work on the user? And by this jutsu, A-ranked lightning jutsu won't work on this user?

Name: Inferno Sphere = (inferuno kuiki)
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu was created by Ryu Naito long ago. it creates an orb of fire chakra in the user’s hand. the difficulty to mastering this jutsu is keeping it from expanding due to the open air. so the training method to learning this starts with learning it inside and keeping a leaf from completely burning, but the flame can’t go out. then they practice with a ball the flame inside causing it to expand but they got to keep it in check or the ball will burst. the next step is keep the orb the desired size outside and hitting a target. the jutsu it self looks likes a red orb spinning with tiny bits of fire coming of like the sun. when it hits it burns what it hits. You use it like chidori & Rasengan hitting it into target there are 3 levels to this jutsu.
Lv.1 it is yellow-orange, can cause 1st degree burns
Lv.2 it is blue, can cause 2nd degree burns
Lv.3 it is white, can cause 3rd degree burns, Causes 1st. degree burns on user

So you made a fire rasengan practically...hmm, if it has 3 stages, shouldn't the rank be B-S, C-A, or something along those lines?

3. Since your pre-academy arc is birth-beginning of genin, I think you should add a little more to it since it's about 3 arcs in one. Other than that, everything looks great
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Re: Naito, Kenshiki (Complete)

Post by kenshiki naito on Sun Aug 08, 2010 12:03 pm

- yes those jutsu are the summonings

- sp. char added

-Inferno Sphere = (inferuno kuiki) rank edited

-arc info added
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Re: Naito, Kenshiki (Complete)

Post by Hayato Uchiha on Sun Aug 08, 2010 4:35 pm

Okay, this is the only thing:
Name: Earth Blade (koudo ken)
Rank: (Varies based on material)
Type: Ninjustu
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu allows the user to make a sword out of the ground around him/her and they can use it like a sword or throw it at an opponent or whatever. also it is only as hard as the ground. The measurements of the newly created sword are
Max Length is 8 ft.
Max Width is 2 ft by 4 ft
Max weight varies depending on material,
-Rank D, dirt is 40 lbs. very dull, cant cut through stuff
-Rank C, copper ore is 45 lbs. less sharp than iron but stronger than dirt
-Rank C, iron ore is 50 lbs. as sharp as average iron swords
-Rank B, stone is 70 lbs. sharper than iron swords
-Rank A, diamond is 60 lbs. Very sharp, can cut through almost anything other than diamond
(Strength of swords are based on material used, dirt is weakest, while diamond is strongest)

Your elemental affinity is earth not diamond, copper, iron, and etc. That's like saying all earth users can use sand when that's only a clan element. So I think you should remove these jutsu, as that's more like a clan jutsu.
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Post by kenshiki naito on Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:54 am

- jutsu removed
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Re: Naito, Kenshiki (Complete)

Post by Hayato Uchiha on Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:12 pm

Okay now THIS is the last thing, everything else is great but this jutsu:

Name: Lightning Absorption Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan: N/A
Element: Lightning
Description: When this jutsu is activated it last about a half hour (5 posts) It causes the users body to be resistant to lightning based attacks be absorbing __% of the chakra from those attacks.
98% of C ranks
78% of B ranks
58% of A ranks
38% of S ranks

Don't you think 5 posts is a little too long? That's 5 posts of B-ranked chakra taken out, especially since the summon is only B-ranked. He would probably be exhausted to almost death if used for 5 posts. Do you understand what I mean? Make it like..1-3 posts. Makes more sense that way
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Re: Naito, Kenshiki (Complete)

Post by kenshiki naito on Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:50 am

- jutsu length modified to 3
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Re: Naito, Kenshiki (Complete)

Post by Hayato Uchiha on Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:07 pm

Well my friend, you are now...Approved! Have fun
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